I have no idea if this is the right place to post this on here, so if it isn't...please don't shoot me

I decided to try DG on my clarinet as I needed something to play for my most recent music assesment.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vk7bwLTAQ0s

opinions?

I know the ending's messed up, it just doesn't sound right the way it's been written..
and I should have used the backing to make it sound more together, but it has a stupid flute part playing nearly every single beat, and it annoys me.

I've just done For Good & ALAYM too.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ujcRrCD3CU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQltmVdzTNg
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x

That's so cool! I wish I could play the clarinet...or any instrument in fact!